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"The Masked Nightmare"Krimson
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« Thread Started on Aug 22, 2009, 3:35am » | |
The scene opens up to the aspect of dark ally way, as the camera clears better view appears. Now you can see the outline of a rather large man, with long black hair covering his face. With a jerk of his head his head his hair flies back exposing his face as a dim camera light flickers on. To the surprise of the viewers the mystery man is wearing a black and red mask and a matching costume like outfit. He brings up his hand one of which is inside of a black glove and rubs them together before speaking into the camera with a dark, menacing, deep voice.
Krimson: UWA, here I lurk through out the dark lonesome allies of the United Kingdom. Through out my day I’ve been doing so. No steady home. No childhood friends. NO LOVING FAMILY! Never in my have I ever felt that warm feeling in my heart that you all call love. I am a MONSTER!
With the emotion in his words the fans watching on their TVs’ actually gets on his side and feel for the lonely “monster” He turns away from the camera and begins to walk steadily down the narrow path and til turning down the end and stops in front a old run down looking garage. No key is used to open it he just opens it and steps in with the cameraman following right in after him. The Masked Nightmare then flicks on a light but the light doesn’t light up allot of the garage just the area from where it hangs. Just against the wall was tool shelf he begins to shuffle through the middle shelf until pulling something out. The sight of the light reflection off the item blinds the view of what it is. Putting it down to his side he begins to walk to the back of the garage and now from behind you can see he is gripping a fisher mans hook. The camera follows him to the back where Krimson disappears behind a black curtain but again followed behind him. The fans are shocked at the sight they see. Sitting on a chair is a unconscious young nigger. His head his drooped down almost resting on his shoulder he has tape around his body and mouth.
To awake the young nigger Krimson takes his free left hand and sends his balled up fist into the skull of the youngster. Slowly his eyes open up and he struggles to scream but the duck tape muffles the sound. While staring down at the kid, he begins to talk.
Krimson: There’s a reason for why I kill. I bet you all would like to know WHY I HATE NIGGERS! Well then listen. When I was younger I was living hell on earth. I was abused by my drunken stepfather. Picked and beat on by the nigglets in my family. Well not any more, never will I allow this to happen to a white kid like me. Last week I saw this pathetic Nigger and his two friends kicking the living hell out of a helpless white boy. Today I will make sure that never happens again.
With those words Krimson steps behind the chair and places the hook softly against the helpless kids jugular and slightly drags it across his neck. You can see the fear in the eye of the African boy as Krimson drags back the hook and quickly pulls it causing the point to rib through the kids dark skin and tear every attachments in the front his neck clean in half. Blood then squirts up at the camera and now all that can be seen is the red tinted blood.
Krimson: Now the only thing left is for UWA to be taken over! MARK MY WORDS WRESTLING WILL NEVER BE THE SAME!
With those words Krimson lets out a high pitched sick laughter before the camera shuts off.
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Steven Powell
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« Reply #1 on Aug 22, 2009, 10:43am » | |
Despite alot of the lines, I enjoyed it.
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« Reply #2 on Aug 22, 2009, 4:41pm » | |
Erm, the theme was fine but the usage of words wasn't quite right. The promo seemed a bit hurried too. But that's okay, hoping to read better stuffs from you. 
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"The Masked Nightmare"Krimson
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« Reply #3 on Aug 22, 2009, 7:08pm » | |
I did this when I was dead tired, because I had the idea in my head and didn't want to forget it in the morning. I'll work on something good today hopefully.
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Steven Powell
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« Reply #4 on Aug 22, 2009, 7:14pm » | |
Based on this promo I do see a good future for you here. Remember we have moved to the other board now. Please repost this over there, because when this version goes inactive for over six months (cant remember exactly how long right now) this site will be deleted.
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